Carnage

[Ape]

Just a quickie.

[≈April]

First impression is it's really bright Maybe a tad too much red though. The color overpowers everything else in the graphic too much (at least for me, but I'm not a huge fan of red in the first place). Though I have to say that I'm really liking the middle part where there's more yellow... the sides just have too much red.

As for the text, I don't like the font, it's a bit difficult to read. If you hadn't posted "Carnage" in the thread title, I wouldn't have been able to tell what it said above your username. I think the type of font would work better at just having been used on your username, and then using something more legible for "Carnage."

It's good that you're again trying a different color scheme though, but I think you can do better.

[Ape]

Jun 7, 2012 3:38:43 GMT ≈April said:

First impression is it's really bright Maybe a tad too much red though. The color overpowers everything else in the graphic too much (at least for me, but I'm not a huge fan of red in the first place). Though I have to say that I'm really liking the middle part where there's more yellow... the sides just have too much red.

As for the text, I don't like the font, it's a bit difficult to read. If you hadn't posted "Carnage" in the thread title, I wouldn't have been able to tell what it said above your username. I think the type of font would work better at just having been used on your username, and then using something more legible for "Carnage."

It's good that you're again trying a different color scheme though, but I think you can do better.

Appreciate the criticism. I am a huge friend of red, but I can agree to an extent that I overdid it a little. I wanted to throw some more yellow in there but I didn't want to overdue such a simplistic tag. I thought the only way I could bring out the focal properly was to give it some contracting colors from the yellow in the middle. Especially it being the comic render that it was haha, it was hard to blend at first.